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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I think that the right foot looks a bit awkward. The left one looks ok, but the right once caught my eye, it just doesn't seem right.
I also think that you should develop your shading techniques to make your art seem a bit better. zB: Why is there a shade only on the left side of the right leg and not right side as well? It would make it a bit darker, but then that is not as big of a problem because I assume you did the coloring on Paint where you can change the color to lighter one.
I would also try pointing out the knees a bit.
And, I'd suggest you develop a new style: it makes you seem original.
I'd give this piece 7/10